grounding
i heard you say
be more concrete
be more concrete
so i interpret it as
density.
i pile up my ideas,
big as buckets,
and fill them with words
fluid to the touch,
the mind dipping in
and grasping at water
until the hands grow tired
of fishing
and you draw nearer
to the edge,
arms extended,
which can’t get you deep
enough.
so then the first tentative
steps
until you are immersed,
acclimating to this cold
verse,
wondering which direction
you should face or where
this stream flows
until you either find
purchase
or the courage to float,
be carried away,
or submerge.
look for pockets of air -
a space to insert your own
voice
where it is
enfolded, and embraced,
and held under
the weight of the river,
the wet tradition of words,
the way language waters
the ground,
the way it grounds
your feet as you enter the
story.